Pet Forum / Aquaria / Goldfish / June 2005

There is this thing that the local mall is doing for kids, they are going to
give out 100 goldfish each with a 1 gallon (give or take- medium critter
keeper ) container.  This is animal cruelty.  Comet goldfish need 20 gallons
per fish.  Its like keeping a dog in the cabinet under the kitchen sink or a
child in a closet.  What i plan on doing is making fliers on proper goldfish
care and posting them on bulletin boards in the town hall, and grocery
stores and whereever else i can and i want to present a bunch of printouts
to the lady who is running this thing.  According to my manager he has told
her that goldfish need bigger before and she refuses to listen but i guess
he told me that the last event they used quart size bowls for the goldfish
they gave out to kids.

What i need help is is that im bad with words, i need help formin the letter
and fliers in To the point wording and it has to sound reasonably polite.
When i get angry (wich i am) i tend to babble and i get mean and stuff.  If
ya want to call i can give the mall office number and the chick's name is
Jill.  Thanks for any encouragement and help.

Sharon